Arright this was pretty basic, I've seen Valor come better before, but his lines had a much better structure, the rhyme scheme was alot more complex and not because of its complexity, but because cmfs verses were just basic- Valor didn't have too many strong punches, but cmfs didn't really have any strong punches- I'm sayin you rhymed but there were no lines that actually stuck and like I already your structure was no good- No hate just my honest opinion. Vote Valor ....... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453

__________________