state: not many punches.. and personals werent that good either.. wasnt really feelin your verse.. some ok wordplay, but i think your multis were kind of forced.. you traded off punches for flow.. which is a bad idea...I mean, im a real multi person, so i really feel punches with ill flow that are done well.. and your punches just didnt hit hard enough

gotaass:

"ur a fake rapper..that jus hate on mine....
only reason ull make it to the "front" of the game is cuz u stay "online"....."
^^lol

but yeah.. although your rhyme scheme wasnt as complex as states, it still flowed well enough.. and you had some nice personals n wordplay in there.. and some pretty hard punches..nicely done

vote: gotaasswhoopin4u

return the favour.. need some votes on my battle with hoops.. its in my sig

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