The Ups and Downs of Life
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If this battle was on openers alone- I'd give it to Kawdic because his opener was pretty nasty, it stuck pretty hard... However both verses went on and I think Body Count was more consistent with his flows... both verses flowed well and had pretty good structure, but Body Count was sayin wittier things, His punches weren't all that hard but he through a few and I felt his style... Kawdic I think you show definate potential with your opener, and the rest of the verse wasn't horrible- it wasnt basic, but you didn't say anything that made me look twice, or chuckle or be like damn. It seemed like a couple rhymes were forced... like saying you'll keep the bullet as a collective... I don't know anyone that collects things and calls them collectives, because a "collective" doesn't exist- its an adjective not a noun in the way you mean it... collective as a noun would be like a business enterprise, or the sum of an entire collection. blah blah sorry for ranting... Good Job both, Good luck in the future... Vote BodyCount
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