This battle was dope- tough to decide a winner here so Ima have to break it down line for line.........
Gettin tackled like rugby, no padding on, Your Raps Are Ugly,
I think your lines forgot to take their beauty sleep..........
Cause Cuttin' Your Verse Far Into Your Skin,
Is The Only Way Your Lyrics Are Deep....................
The rhyme scheme is kind of strange- but decent opening line, and the last two lines are pretty good- decent wordplay o.k punch -
7/10
Your Wackness Is exposed to many viewers,
Like The play-Boy Channel...............
The Closest To Creative Punches you'll ever get,
Is Clicking On The Control Panel..........
This was o.k- The concept was there but not one of your better punches in this battle
6/10
Kid Lacks Power, This Coward, Will Get Ripped N' Devoured..............
Your soft like ur body wen u just get out da shower,
Decent wordplay- good flow some multi work in here, the punch wasn't great but not bad either....
7/10
who knows what kinda wackness he'll spit in a couple of hours.............
I "Intend", to spit anthrax on Queer's best friend,
so don't open any PM's i might send.....................
I honestly don't know what it is about these couple lines but I really like it... just a subtle insult- the flow goes nicely- I like it...
7/10
Your Lines are similar to a Horses Rear End................
Kids Lines Are as Hot as Bitches sittin in the free Clinic..............
I Checked your battle stats,
there was no hard defeat in-it..........................
Wasn't really feelin the first bar here, but I liked the second... decent personal -
7/10
How Can he be so wack, when he's from the home of the legends..........
Each Line I spit, Your Loss Is Edgin.....................
shouldnt of checked, rob you from your Money and cheques.........
if actors rapped,
You'd Be the Steven Siegal Of text
First bar- flowed well... decent insult, no wordplay- third line was kind of filler but the closing line was dope... I chuckled on that Steven Segal shit....
8/10
42/60 total.
You started this gauge, my mentals pack showing this bitch is wack…
He'll lose so bad, he'll do a Ja Rule and Clap Back…
decent opener, but wack and back is kind of a basic rhyme - nice wordplay though -
7/10
My styles are wicked, evil crowds in thickness…
Yeah State spits sick shit....after his bowels get twisted…
the first line flowed good, but it was filler... the second line was a nice punch, good wordplay -
7/10
Come out that closet! don't fake son, just be yourself…
State could beat me(nah), yeah, once I unsheath my belt…
this rhymed really well, I dunno about using the word unsheath here though- but I see where the punch was going...
7/10
Whoa Whoa, State chill!!, I'm not your damn pops…
Cause if I did, you'll be a “Marvel” like the one eyed like cyclops…
Don't get it backwards, I hate this fake rapper with passion…
But moderate it slowly like rations…
Not really feelin this part of your verse... I think everything was pretty consistent up to here and the marvel punch is pretty good, but the second bar stops abruptly and really hears the flow, and it doesn't have a real solid punch or any great wordplay
6/10
Any chance you have?Take it whether its a sucker punch,or low blow…
Like Nate Dogg was speaking to you personally about this battle when singing the song..like "O,, NO!”…
Struc went off alot- I liked the punch here and I think this coulda won the battle for you- as it is though its still good..
7/10
State’s rhymes couldn't be 'Multi' if he ripped with a speaker…
Don't even post,save your rhymes, it's the only way you spit keepers
This closer was dope- nice flow, and wordplay- this punch hit very nicely, it was probably the hardest line in this battle..
9/10
overall 43/60 --- Like I said.. this battle was very close - It came down to both of your closers, and I think Mixtape just barely edged him out. Good job both... Good luck in the future- I'd really apreciate an honest vote from both of you -
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