mixtape: a nice verse. loved that closer.. the rest of your punches didnt come off as hard though... nice flow, structure, and decent wordplay.

state: a bit of an unusual rhyme scheme. It doesnt look too pretty, but it works if you say it out loud.. so theres nothing wrong with your flow. To me, your punches came harder.. and although your closer wasnt as good as mixtapes, the actual verse was better. Some nice wordplay.

v/ State capitol

return the favour. need votes on me vs hoops, in my sig

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