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Bitches I've Sonned
From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em. |
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IP:
Nice battle, look's like a good match-up.
I liked State's flow in this it was very different than any ordinary battles, which I liked. He was very creative in his rhyming aswell and his punchlines. Your flow wasn't to well though.
Mixtape, your opener is real real play'd right now. About Ja Rule and Clap Back, ain't workin' no more. But your closer was good. Also, I liked your flow through the whole verse. I didn't like your punches though.
Here it breaks down:
Opener: State
Punches: State
Personals: Mixtape
Flow: Mixtape
Structure: State
Vocabulary: Tied
Vote-State
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Mike Hawk is a wackass......
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