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Old 07-05-04, 12:33 AM   #13
QBsmasher
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This battle was aight, I was feelin it. State capitol you gotta do somethin with that structure, I seen your rhyme scheme but put your structure together better so you can see it. Like dude said it sound good when you read it out loud, but when you look at it its totally wack. You had some hard hittin punches though, I thought state had a more consistent punch scheme than mixtape did. Shit was ill, MIXTAPE the closer on your battle was fuckin syck....highlight of the battle by far, I thought state was better throughout though.

VERY VERY VERY MINIMAL v/state