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Old 07-05-04, 01:32 AM   #9
Orijinal
Bitches I've Sonned
 
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From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
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got a theory on why they call this guy one man band..
cause he rides solo, dolo, just him and his hand!!..1
Aight opener, a little simplistic..7/10
i dont know whats worse, constant masterbation or bad rhymes..
so he decided for me...........and does both at the same time..2
Heh, aight nice..made me laugh which was good 8/10
recollect,you couldnt post "hot" text with a burnt keyboard..
and ya rhymes smell more ass than phones hear SEE MORE..(see more butts)3
Weak & wack punchline..6/10
label me tarot card reader,special olypics your future plan..
kid couldnt tell left from right if i smacked em with both hands!..4
WAck..no hot punches yet..5/10
*smacksmack*,launchin attacks,verbally smashin his ass..
makin presents for his teacher,only time hes rappin for class..(status)5
There we go..nice..8/10
raking up leaves only times hes ever moved large crowds..
breaking the keys M C, only way he'd rip me into shrouds..6
WAAAAAAAACK the first line is simplistic 4/10
you are bout as useful as a black man to the KKK..
writing directions to my verse,wouldnt help you "walk this way"..7
Okay..the first line fucked it up..simplsitic again..5/10
im leaving you dis-armed like a Gimp vietnam-verteran..
just wait to see the votes,and you'll see its you im better-than..8
WEAAK closer...wasnt good enough 4 a closer..5/10

48/80

Yo, im amazin-n-fly, when it comes to punches im the most dangerous-guy..
hmm.. your verse wasnt that bad, hell it took you a whole day-to-reply..
hah...from wut i see in time..that is true..nice..9/10
but wack raps ya writin-a-pile... truth is man you aint been tight-in-a-while..
I aint gonna say you suck though.. how could you? you been bitin-my-style..
[b]lmao...nice nice nice...lmao..8/10


punch to make ya sinuses-spill, im the king of this place n ya higness-is-ill..
put my nines-to-ya-grill... ya multi attempts look like mine minus-the-skill..
good multi..good..8.5/10
man, ya lines-are-not-ill.. ill divide-em-with-cuts, rippin ya pride-n-ya-guts..
masterbation lines are played... specially when your the one ridin-my-nuts!..*
LMAO..nice..nice..but try not to feed off 7/10
I hate doin gay jokes.. the thing is this guy keeps straddlin-men..
needed to boost his ego, so he decided hed start battlin-fems..
iight..nuttin special 5/10
but wait.. the votes showed miss. lyricist took-him-wit-size..
dont be fooled by this "vet", hoops is just a rook-in-disguise!!!**
nice..the rook-in-diguise..good 8/10
im rockin-ya-brains.. go ahead talk-bout-my-name, im breakin-ya-chin..
If im battlin hoops... but i flawlessed-the-dame... who u thinks takin-this-win??***
okay..just complimentin ya self..5/10
leave ya heart achin-n-grim.. my punches pack heat, start bakin-ya-skin..
for me this aint comin hard.. me n "hoops" buds so im just "playin"-with-him
niiiiice closer...betta than Hoops..7.5/10

58/80

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Can both of yall vote on my current battle wit 'Louis Vuittion' it's quite amusing..please vote..vote hoenstly and professionally..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133302
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