-Loosecanon.
yo i don't y sum bitch would name dem selves state capitol in da 1st case
ur a pitful excuse of a mc on rb who is a disgrace 2 da whole entire human race
coo flow, weak wordplay, weak punch
ya softer den fuccin charmin tissue dat sumbody blows their nose wit
u giving me an oral presentation like monica lewinskosy did 2 da president
weak flow, good wordplay, played out punch
ur whole rapping style is like a see-thru pair of boxers ur azz is threw
cuz out of all da members out of hardwood class sickz ur da weakest link out of ya crew
average flow, should've switched the lines, first line had wordplay and was an aight punch
u neva should have accept my challenge 2 u anotha L 2 ur lost column
i'm like a bowling ball & ur like bowling pins dat i knock down who can't help but 2 keep falling
weak flow, weak wordplay, wording wrecked this line completely
so wut u should do is fall 2 ur knees & beg me 4 mercy & not 2 lyrically kick ur azz nemo
cuz i'm done wit blazing, toting, & smoking ur ho azz like i do when i smoke my dro
so so flow, aight wordplay, played out punch


-Statecapitol.
Merk you easily if murder was the case,
i'd have you preachin, Like Murda Mase...............
average flow, good wordplay, weak punch
If you steppin to my plate,
ill blow off your fuckin hands before you even touch home base..........
average flow, aight wordplay, would've been a decent line with better wording
Blast The Gauge put A whole through your rib cage..............
your bars aint stoppin me,
Like a fat bitch trapped in a bird cage..............
aight flow, rhyming cage twice was , decent wordplay, aight punch
your lines dont even rhyme it was more rock & roll then hiphop.........
like a fat man on an anerexic chick,
im crushin this bitch from ontop....................
so so flow, decent wordplay, two similar punches in a row ain't good, spread them out next time mayne.
This Gay Wannabee thug calls Himself Loose Cannon...........
But the only thing you bangin is Dums..Like Nick Cannon...........
rhyming two words unless it has a purpose ain't good either, coo wordplay, aight punch
Rip out your verses spinal chord, so your lines collapse...........
An attach-on dick is the only thing you got strapped........
average flow, decent wordplay, played out punch
Dayum Once again I K.O another weak Fag..................
and once again the cops have to put another,
one of my victims in a plastic bag..........
average flow, not really any wordplay, straight punch though


Overall State got this. State, you made some dumb mistakes mayne. Just take some time with your verses, because I can see you're better than this. Besides your mistakes, work on your creativity and flow a little. Ain't too much wrong with your steez mayne. I see you keep getting closer and closer to being good. Ain't too many now who actually trying to adjust their shit. Props to you mayne. Loose, work on your flow, creativity, wordplay and consistently using punchlines. State took the flow, wordplay, punchlines in this battle.


Vote - Statecapitol.