well
dogg: ur shit was ok but ur punches made no sense at all
and they werent hittin hard
your structure was ok n flow was good
meta's,...eh..and u lacked multi's
poetic: u had the better verse
i could understand your punches
your personals were hittin harder
flow and structure was beeter
vote: poetic
i aint gon drop a poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133281