ok, readin through hellrazors verse i couldnt relly undastand what chu wus tryin 2 git across in sum lines, i think you were tryin 2 be 2 complex but u wus usin 2 many syllables. also sum words seemed 2 me like they wus in the wrong place or sumthin.

"think u a champion , with over 600 posts & betta go shoot sum hoops"
thats not relly a diss, i jus dont git it na mean.. there wus more bud i cant be bother findin em.

hoops, yo shit wus aiight. i liked this bar-
this kid couldnt hoola my hoop, if he was at toys r us..
and even if he caught on fire,girls wouldnt say hes "hot stuff"..
that wus prolly ya best line, basically, hoops shit made more sence 2 me, and sum of his bars were used pretty well, so im gon give this vote 2 hoops..

vote-hoops

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