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Old 07-05-04, 11:26 AM   #21
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I Really Wasnt That Impressed With The Lines Put Out Here...
But I'll Break This Shit Down...

Punchesrumil...
Wordplayrumil...
Structure:Miles...
Flow:Miles...

East Miles-Since I been on this site I ain't seen no hard rapps......So I'll be the first one to come hard, like bats breaking ya knee caps..
What The Fuck, I'm Sorry Kid You Need Some Work...
Drumil-This bitch is gay, sayin you gonna rip me? Bitch I make pain rikashey/
I'm "servin" ya "hot" like "Dominoes", you stay "burnt" inside my "heatwaves"//

Very Weak As Well And Didnt Flow At All But Hit Harder...
Openerrumil...

East Miles-Let you grit and grind your teeth and get ya boys to ride and die bullets fly into ya gut when I waive my fist into the sky....marking the end of your life when I apply pressure from bullets into you left and right eye.....
Riiiiiight, Sorry Mayn But This Wasnt Good Either...
Drumil-Pain like a kick in the nutsack, Durmil got this East Mile bitch whacked/
Skill u lack, this loss comin to u bout as quick as a dick to ur asscrack//

Both Of You Need Some Help With Your Settups And Punches, But This Is Alil Better...
Finisherumil...
Overall Enjoymentrumil...
Vote Goes To Drumil, But Both MC's Really Need To Elevate...
Not Trying To Hate, Just My Honest Opinions...
~One~