Miss.
X-Man is some fresh meat that’s ready to battle
But he still suckin his pacey and shakin his rattle
personal wit a weak baby meti4. 4/10
The noob can’t chew solids, let alone swallow my verse
I think the baby needs to burp cause he’s about to burst
still on the baby stuff. 4/10
But he thinks he’s a big boy because he be takin his calcium
Though you have a small head, it’s a thick ass cranium
weak punch. 3/10
But sooner or later, someone will discover your horrific body
They must’ve wrestled a gator, and IDed you by dentals shawty
OK. 4/10
The mortician will be certain that something went amiss
I beat your face so much, they’ll be wonder if you had a lift
doesn't make much sense. A face lift helps. U do his make Up? 2/10
But don’t get mad if you lose and your record’s no longer even
Remember that cliché? “Everything happens for a reason”
played personal. second line was ok. 5/10
But I’m the captain of this boat, and you’d be good for the fish
I’ll send you overboard and tell the crew “Let him drift”
Ok closer. no real hard punch tho. 4/10
Slightly less than mediocre, No offense. Your punches aren't really that hard and you seem to tell more of a story than a battle. I think it's because you drag one thought for 4 or 6 lines at a time. Work on gettin it done in 2 lines the most. Also multi's never hurt, just dont get carried away like some people do.
26/7037%

Xentrik
captian of this boat? ya positions been revoked
napkins in ya coat- lips glisten come deepthroat
you fed. The whole boat deal. 1/10
the only fish driften is that smell from ya snatch
doll its either that or jus ya rotten cabbage patch
Feed again. 1/10
id reward ya more if ya werent a crack whore
none ya customers payments in cash anymore
kinda funny. simple tho. 4/10
sick of sacks when i should get money stacks
so ima clean you out as if you drank sum xlax
good punch. good meti4. 6/10
like a practice round you arent worth the effort
hittin mad hotties when im gray like hue heffner
Didn't flo. dumb meti4. 2/10
I understand your situation an your probly alot better than this straight. So I don't really have any advice for you other than to not feed off people's verse's. It will just lose the battle for you. Unless you have idiot's voting. That's all, don't smoke an battle. Lol.
14/5028%

Vote/Miss. Lyricist

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