This was pretty simple. I'm not gonna do my usual break down.
It would take like an hour.
Body Count
Your verse wasn't that bad. Your main problem is vocab, some times you used some dumb words (smitten). You had the right idea wit personal's but never really hit hard wit any of them. Mainly work on the vocab.
Durmil
This was a good drop. I see your trick of the font change to make your stretched lines fit. An that's ok for now. But you should fix it for the future when you battle more worthy heads. Try an be more original too. I see pattern's in your battles' wit your personal's. Just try and mix it up a lil bit. Not to take anything away from your drop. Very Nice. I think you took this easily.

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