miss so ugly, she spreads frowns like diseased needles..
she blinded to talent,eyes chinked like vietnamese-people..
she couldnt soar above par, if i knocked her ass inta-orbit..
only time she come ahead of me, is signing onto the forum.. - these were 4 nice lines... good wordplay solid punches... my favorite part of the verse from you-- nice job..

I’ll spit at you in a different language, you faglike mamasita
No habla enspaniol? But you can’t understand English either! - This was my favorite part from Miss Lyricisit... You show huge potential, but a few of your punches were a little basic and seemed a little forced, but you definately climbin up... nice job, --- vote Hoops- I felt like his verse was more consistent and I was really feelin a couple of his lines. please both of you feel free... drop an honest vote- its in elevated, 100 posts to vote--- http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453

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