arright heres an honest vote for a couple of honest guys- please return the favor... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453

Ketch - Your flow throughout the whole verse was good... you exhibited some nice wordplay, with some strong lines... I really liked your opener through the "dodge" talon line- Some sick stuff in there... nice verse...

Flow- Your flow was good as well, the rhyming scheme was little simpler than ketch's- you also exhibited some good wordplay as well- you threw in some personal shit too- like the age negative nine line- that was pretty dope...

It was hard for me to pick a winner so I went on my favorite lines from both of you to decide....

take a number cuz you aint comprehendin these competitive lines
i'll take 22 and subtract 31...so it can equal ya age...negative nine* -
Shit was sick here.... sick flow, excellent wordplay- give this bar an 8/10

You need some talent-scout cuz our skillz just don't, Balance-Out,
Plus I Spit Talons Out, that "Make u Go to dodge" Like the Talons-Out.
I really liked this line- it flows well- and the wordplay is ridiculous- The only problem I have with it is you said "Talons-Out" twice... I understand Talon would have to be used twice to acheive the wordplay you were goin for- but I think you could have subsituted one of the "out's with something else for maximum effectiveness... ima give it a 7.5/10- -- Vote Flow Intelligent... Like I said, return the favor pooples...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453

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