yo this was kinda weak- I've seen both of you come nicer than this before- but as it stands heres my honest breakdown....

yu not comp to me, deez punches stomp for free//
have ya strugglin 2 breathe like an outta breath heavy d//
very basic punch here, and rhyming free with d aint too hard--- very dissapointing... 5/10
tryin to b killa cam but u just anotha teen strugglin wit cha sexuality//
bubble wrapped in pink wit a mic tryin to "pop" some faggot shit at me//
Kind of a forced multi in terms of rhymability- the punch is a little better than the first bar, but even the wordplay is a little basic--- better than the first line though... 6/10


Your gonna be asking for a loss reduction like ya was getting a rebate
You be in each and every state ,searching for some rhymes like u was on Ebay
First line was decent-- but not feelin the second or the punch- decent rhyme though -
7/10
Ya the closest you got to a barrel is touching a tech9 cd
Ya couldnt have my head if you had a rhyme in a head like...ET..
again feelin the first line- but not really the second.... I think this was stronger than mics jumpoff though, if for nothing else but the rhyme scheme is on point.- 7/10

Vote KillaCamFlow--- Good luck in the future both.... and fluckin drop a vote here... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132453

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