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~Killah~
Yo Night Vision its a Fight decision but ya dumb
Try to look in the future kid now ya 5-1
^Weak played line poor opener^
You think u spell sick smell sick but chould i care-less
To win this battle cry to god to get Blessed
^Don't really understand this line weak^
The vision i see is ur little bitch ass losein Duke
Leave ya on tha floor like its a madden Juke
^Best line from killa but again weak^
~NightVision~ *Trace now*
introduce this wannabe faggot fuckin face to tha curb~
roll him up and smoke this cat cause he's a tru herb~
^Lol good opener already won the battle^
fuckin mushy faggot your rhymes i'll just str8 consume~
this guy couldnt get pussy if he lived in a woom~
^Again good bar^
given this cat internal plus external fuckin wounds~
the only time he passin hot shit is when he gets gas from prunes~
^Not a bad close but the structure went a bit off @ the end^
Total miss match in my eyes Killah you really need to elevate
your shit, have a look at some of the help you can get on the
site. Didn't do well in anything really didnt rhyme if it did it
was playyyyed... No punchs, no wordplay, below basic.
Trace done well in this one, Would have killed this kid with just
the opener. Weak battle Trace need to start battle some peeps
in your own league now leave the newbs your better then that.
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