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Old 07-05-04, 07:15 PM   #11
Malefic
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Lyrical
i get down on da mic, and ur style is used,
battling me ur guarenteed 2 get broke and abused,
Simple. Basic. Punch. 3/10
u should treat my lyrics like ur still in school,
but dont flirt wit girls and pretend ur cool,
Blah. 2/10
cuz when i grab da mic i start to get clever,
my styles got more switchups, than the weather,
Blah. 3/10
postin a battle with me without lettin me know,
now im going 2 lyrically bury u 6 ft below,
the 6 feet thing is played. 1/10
ill battle u and all the crew u have up ther in Chitown,
murder ya'll 1 by 1, and leave the bodies where they wont be found.
personal. basic punch. 3/10
Lyrical I'll be honest. Your verse is way to simple. You need to spice it up. Give it sum Pep,Zest,Spark. Work on your punches and originality and put more in your lines.
12/50

LilChi
fixed structure...
iight nigga u went 2 far when u talk about Chitown,
Im tha prince and ill show u tha crown/
Fed. Your showin him ur jewelry. WOW. 1/10
lyricalflowz dont kid urself,
u aint no good u need me jus 2 get ja wealth/
NO. 1/10
u fake dont put tupac as ur avacator,
imma shoot u now and slit ur throat lata/
dumb personal. doesn't ryhme 1/10
battlin u is fun 2 do,
this practice 2 me its a championship battle 2 u/
Ok I guess.. kinda 2/10
take 23 out ur name ur neva be tha greatest,
keep tryin 2 rap u betta hope my flowz contagious
good personal. kinda 3/10
I dunno. Work on everything. I fixed your structure. Thats how it should look. Make some punches. Don't feed. Use non-obviouse personal's. And come more clever. Do everything lol. No Hate.
8/50

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