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Old 07-05-04, 07:19 PM   #12
Orijinal
Bitches I've Sonned
 
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From: Orijinal, a young lyrical mind who loves tearin' other challengers heads off and put a loss onto their record. He hates losing, he hates cheaters, he hates crew votes, dickriding and any other way of letting others win easily. Holla at 'em.
IP:

Scrappy You Dumb Wanting To Battle What Is Your Head Full Of Rocks/ And This A Dumb Move Like Ones The Crimimals Do On Cops/
Alright opener..7.5/10
You Need Some Hot Punches Come See Your Man/ Cause I Can Give You A Hook Like The Crook From Peter Pan/*
Alright punch..but a hook is a chorus..not a punchline..6/10
I Am Live When I Come Thought You Speakers/ And He The Only One I Know Rocking Shaq Sneakers/
WAAACK..WAAACK..5/10
You Said That You Are Almost Iileagal So Misdeameanor/and My Flow Leave Break Up Like Ike And Tina/
I seen the "ike and tina" a lot now..a little play'd..6/10
This Kid Not An Artist He Is Just An Actor/how Much Can He Know With A Sig Full Of Wack Rappers
weak closer..just pure weak..5/10

29.5/50

Who comes wit weak punchs? Is a pussy and loves dick like a Female Child/
If u made the common mistake and said State Cap… ur wrong its BuckWIld/
heh..alright opener..u used his name..8/10
He comes into RB pulln a Bill Clinton “ I did not have sex with that man”/
But then the lil boy was caught take’n AKA, to a modified american plan/
]arlgith..lookin for sum punchlines thou 6/10
If you could just of rhymed a lil better, it might just of added some pressure/
Misdeameanor and Ike And Tina?? Ya rhymes clearly shows that im fresher/
dont try to feed off..it loses points for u..it makes u look like u didnt have no other lyrics to make so u just did it off his rhymes 5/10
In this battle, Buckwild is gonna leave this thread as my prisoner of war/
Hes 17, still watchs Peter pan, but worst of all he grew up in Baltimore/
Alright..used a personal..once again fed off..n whats wrong with Baltimore? 5/10
If I stopped after only writeing my first two lines, still wouldn’t have a chance/
So my word of advice before you come back for a rematch is, Dawg advance/
Another weak closer..it was really a "banger" for a closer..6/10

30/50

Whoa..that's like the closet I've ever judge just by .5 points...

Vote-Scrappy

Can yall please vote on this battle.. i really took the time to judge on this..vote honestly and professionally..
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133302
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