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Old 07-05-04, 07:30 PM   #14
illiance
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haha i liked this battle it was aight but anyways:

Buck: flow was a lil off, syabble count didn't match much but what you tried was cool with a few punches an dpersonals it wasn't bad. You do need to elevate however on the creativness front an shit like originality you know|? overall not bad tho man you've got room to elevate.

Scrappy: nice verse, liked the style and it flowed good too. Not much bad about it apart from originality coulda been better plus if you had a few multi's and more vocab in there you would killed it completely, nice work tho.

V:Scrappy

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