.....Death Awaits.....
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IP:
QB
Ill rap thru you, and hit TRIGGA MATRIX in waiting
In just one sitting, Ill murder two emcees ratings
kinda off topic. good comeback tho. 6/10
I Took aim, didnt think hed stand up for his name
So I did him like pussy lips, FUCK YA, till ya came
Ok. pretty played tho. the whole Cumin thing. 4/10
Pick which pitch to throw, consistent like menstral flow
Someone called the DEP, my spits bad on the environment
His rhymes are taxed, like fifty percent of his retirement
Flo lost me for a sec. Ok metiphore/punch 5/10
My tactical placement, is bein broadcast from my basement
Theyre gonna use illiance as Willian Hung's replacement
Lol. pretty nice. liked it. 6/10
I spit photons, radioactive when I gain a proton
You love the kids? What are you Jimmy Neutron?
kinda fruity. 4/10
Im "in the zone", and these "spears" are "toxic"
From poison darts to sling shots that how i rock it
all self hype. 1/10
Tryin to get to the throne, climbin the ladder shown
But you wont be able to "pass me" like a bladder stone
Last line was killer. 7/10
Pretty good with the exception of a line or two. Your vocab was OK. what impressed me was your wordplay on the last line. That was huge. Nice Work.
33/70
Illiance
Ill the rhyme-soldier Vs Q, that's fine - hold it...
The only way you "beatin'" me is with fake titties an I'm blindfolded!
Eh. ok meti4.not feelin it. 4/10
My flows like I'm submerged you've already sunk with your punk rhymes,
Drowned this runt guy who can't come up for air-or even with a punch-line,
kinda used the same line twice. 2/10
Got you feelin' "negative" already I should'a "filmed" that,
You got amnesia from that punch screamin'-"Where my skills at!!??"
Ok. first word play was kinda stale. second line i liked. 5/10
Fool you never had 'em, this battle's now a Biblical war,
Causin' premature death-I've strangled you with umbilical cord,
Really nice.Closer material. 7/10
I figure you poor by the way you can't pay attention,
I'm 19-but with your mom against the wall i feel I'm pickin' up my pension,
OK played wordplay. 4/10
Haha it's a bad mistake like rolled tobacco this fags a disgrace,
Talkin' 'bout your mom-like a ethic joke it's jus' bad-taste,
Really nice. clever shit. 8/10
Just like you even thinking bout steppin' up to me,
This text-emcee will eventually find out what the effects will be,
Filler. 2/10
Now vexed you'll see it's like puttin your pinky in a lyrikal socket,
Now this win's jus' like your mom's cell number - in my pocket...
Dumb closer. not aimed at QB 2/10
You had a OK verse wit 2 really nice bars. and a few good ones. Mixed wit 1 or 2 bad ones. Not bad overall, your few good ones helped you a lot. Keep up the good work.
34/70
Vote/Illiance
best match up I've voted on so far. both came good.
Drop an honest vote on the battle's in my sig. Thanks.
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