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Lyriclesolja
You came very basic. oo basic infact. Try an beefup your lines wit more context. As in punches, personals, and metiphores. Your flo isn't too bad just work on puttin some meat on it. No hate
Mimesi
The opposite for you LOL. Try an jus size the lines down jus a bit and you'll have alot better flow. Other than that, your punches an personals dominated here. Just fix your structure for when you battle more skilled opponents. Nice Job.
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