Originally Posted by State CapiTol

fuck it i aint wastin no time

You aint no vet-er-an, You had to give head to get-ahead............
He On Stage Like,
"Its Spul imma Blue-Print Veteran, Gunit101 is da only one im better than"....
1st line was ok but 2nd was weak.

Beatin me is Not possible, Punches will put you in the hospital........
How You gon' defeat me when you can't get passed the smaller opsticles....
what are the smaller obsticles you are referring to? because you have no proof or knowledge to that 2nd line I dont rate this.

You aint best Emcee for 4/04/, That Was April Fools..........
These Nines Will soak up your body more then public Swimming Pools......
decent metas...but I mean dont waste a line talkin about thug shit...its not a punch.

You Aint Part of a Crew, DId You Even Read the Blue-Print.......
The Plan Was To steal your beats and then Get Rid Of You,
Cause You Worthless Like Buttons and Lint................
egrh the flow was demolished here. The wortless comparison line was basic.

I Seen Your Pic, Everyone Look, Mr.Bean Is Back..........
SPul can't produce, soundclick page Full Of Wack Tracks..........
again basic

SP stands for Stupid Pussy, I won't be surprised if he doesn't drop........
Stick To your tradition, it's obvious you arent meant for HipHop.......
basic.

Do yourself a favour and freepost 3 x so you can get DQ'd..........
Cause You Finna Melt Quick Like An Ice Cream cone from DQ....
was ok
(dairy queen)
Lastin Line, everyones quiet, surrounded by the media.......
Fuck the last line thhe first 14,
already have him on the first flight back to indiana............
was shit.

verse was very basic.

Originally Posted by SPuL

[COLOR=Indigo][FONT=Comic Sans MS]yea, whatever did this in 15 mins:

You’ll never be significant in this game, cuz you got no fuckin’ flow
The only State Capitol you are, is the one abbreviated KO
I would of re worded this..."the only state capitol is in is KO'd." I did get that punch so it wasnt a bad opener, could of been re worded better.

You say my beats suck. Fuck you, you can’t hear or see
You needed a beat for the anthem, and who’d you ask? It was me
flow went off slightly. Erm...this was weak but it was a personal and I guess u take this many ways.

So stop it wit this shit. Go hold yo dick, cuz skill you lack it
Man, I’ll knock you out faster that Andy Roddick wit a racket
pretty nice.

Don’t be proud of yo record, cuz you battled herbs jus to get it
You prolly smoke ‘em too, cuz the rules of flow, you always forget it
decent diss to his flow...nice.

Yes, I jus rhymed wit the same endin’, but still… I fuckin’ merked you
Cuz yo verse had me confused like Kutcher, but I’m askin’… “Where’s yo flow, dude?”
didnt like that^

Weaker than usual but an average verse.