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Old 07-05-04, 10:33 PM   #17
QBsmasher
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X had a tight structure, it was strange though cause some of the shit didnt flow...like the last line. I think i kinda agree...Miss that you do run a thought out 4 to 6 lines, its straight in most cases though, I suppose it can get monotinous though. X your punchlines werent hittin at all, the X-lax line was pretty tight though. Miss Lyricist just had way more punches than you, opened and closed her battle much better. You should had a diff closer the hugh thing just didnt make sense.

v/ Miss Lyricist