Thread: J DOT vs Blimp
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Old 07-05-04, 11:08 PM   #9
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Blimp ya verse was syck man, nice punces...I was really feelin the flow. Nice metas esp the one with the jello like bill cosby. You did have a couple streched lines though, work on that to help the structure a bit. Nice multis too those are what kept ya flow in check.

J Dot you were feedin off him bad, and he still murked you. You dont go feedin off peeps verses, thats just a good way to lose, your structure was way off, wasnt feelin the flow. You did have some good punches though, and a few good metas would been better if you werent feedin.

v/Blimp

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