Scriptive you opened up pretty good, nice punch about the copy and paste. It seemed though as you went on your lines got shorter and shorter, like you were tired or something, you didnt seem to be in it. That really hurt your structure, a few punches not many good metas or multis, and no personals.

BigChase, some real nice metas in there, i guess im not stupid lol. The flow was pretty consistent thru the rhyme, i was feelin it...you could put that to some beat and go with it thats what i like. Your punches were hittin thru the verse, and you came pretty hard. Kept up the tempo that you started with, then you ended your verse well too.

v/BigChase

Return the favor please:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133401