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Old 07-06-04, 01:00 AM   #10
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-Vishissb.
watsthe point a carryin a nife if u can even fight,
thinkin someone ill jump u or threaten ur life,
coo flow, no wordplay, no punch
an if they do ull be ready,
ur nife in ur hand an ur anga steady,
average flow, no wordplay, no punch
but deep in side ur soul, u wanna crawl into a whole,
roll up in to a ball like a pitifil mole,
coo flow, aight wordplay, weak punch
sweat drippin into a volumis puddle a body soil,
ur like an actor pretendin to be royal, the enemy is milk an u hope they spoil,
coo flow, aight wordplay, forced too many ideas in this
around here ur nife is ur only friend,
it cant dis u an ruin ur trend, while othas try an condesend,
coo flow, no wordplay, no punch
well i may rap bad an i may rap good,
but unlike others im not from the hood,
average flow, no wordplay, no punch
but wats that mean,
that just because im clean, that i cant be seen,
coo flow, no wordplay, no punch
by the bright lights, that shine like ultra brite,
just because i don get in bloddy fist fights, evry god forsaken nite,
good flow, so so wordplay, weak punch


-Godsson.
Yo, you drop TEXT DISGUSTING, peeped ur crew, dog you're LESS THAN NOTHING..
bring yer squad, Ill "take vishish down myself" like employees lookin fo destruction!/
good flow, liked the multis, coo wordplay, aight punch
Legends a DEMON WITH VISCIOUS LINES...
faggit, told you to go "blow for blow" with me, you were EAGER TO 69!/
average flow, coo wordplay, played out punch
Watch me CHOKE THIS FRAIL COWARD,
Touchin-my- spot-nah get fucked-when-u-"drop-bars" like 'SOAP' IN JAIL SHOWERS/ lol
coo flow, aight wordplay, played out to death punch
U aint SURVIVING THIS cause this verse'll get so many "Ohhs(Owe)"
I'll prolly get DENIED FOR A LOAN!/
average flow, decent wordplay, forced punch
ill BOMB YOUR FACE THE FLOW HURTS,
and yer punches? like "alsheimers patients with master locks"...the 'COMBINATIONS DONT WORK!'/
average flow, decent wordplay, straight punch
Okay you dont know how to battle, didnt you any personals G//
i'ma take it easy on you this time Vishish b//
average flow, no wordplay, no punch
Haha he wanted me to spit tonite, i was going out but hes probably staying up//
so i told him fuck off and put my away message up//hahaha
average flow, weak wordplay, weak punch
im VEXED AND SO PISSED, grab TECHS AND THROW CLIPS,
just got back from rehab, kept readin your verse then "hit X" TO CLOSE IT!
coo flow, aight wordplay, weak punch


Overall, Son took this. Son had the wordplay, punches, and flow. Stop bolding your wordplay, take the - out to show multis, shorten your lines, and work on your creativity. Vish, work on forming a punchline, creativity, a more complex flow, and wordplay.


Vote - Godsson.