Off Ur loving U track.

It was straight, Ur voice is a lil to ruff, but U flow was ill though. I heard the real beat to this one befor thoagh, Its by a group called Tha Mexicanz, but U ripped it. I barely could make out wat U was saying sometimes though but it was kewl though. 6 - 10

Shawtie,
my boys got me into underground club hits but I still aint down wit it too much though. If the quality in Ur vocals was a lil sharper Ud be alot better. The hook was kinda nasty though. It sounds like Timberland meet Spuls basement. the beat was okay but it got too crazy in the hook. 5 - 10

I'll murder U,
Intro sounds crazy, its ill. sounds like some star wars shit. U should let the beat play out a bit. Ur flow was good but it goes off a lil. I think this one is ur hardest one so far. Ur second verse is lacking the energy from the first. the hook needs something. Its too simple till U get to the gun part. 9 - 10

Baby Gurl,
not to happy wit the name, reminds me of Fabolouse. Im on the intro now and so far the beat is sick. U still could'nt let the beat ride out. Ur flow wasent as good but Ur story was kinda ill if U listen to it. nice work. But the second verse again seems to drop the ball. still a good song. U also a lil stook on marrage, I kant stand why dudes is fixed on it. U should've suggested she'd be Ur girl rather than wife. still good thoagh. 7 - 10

dont fuck wit Us,
I also heard this beat befor, Ur boy is garbage. Im currently waiting for his verse to end just to listen to Ur verse, I see why U specifficly distinguished who is who, cuz I wouldnt wanna be him either. Ur flow isnt too good but it wasnt Ur fault. the beat sucked. U did wat U could wit wat U had. I bet Ur boy wrote the hook to. Keep em out the studio and U'll be getting paid in no time kid. 3 - 10
U got potentio
no beef. keep it real.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..