EyeDentdy
get rid of / at the end of ur lines...its gay...structure is ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow was ok, it fell off a lil though...no metas...wordplay was pretty simple, but decent...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals..

JaeBurnz354
like i told eyedentdy, get rid of the / at the end of ur lines...structure was wack...u had lines short as hell, then switched to lines stretched as hell...flow fell off BAD cause of ur wack structure...a few metas...wordplay was simple, and wack...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
JaeBurnz354 had more metas...both had a few connecting punches...and neither had good personals...EyeDentdy had the better structure, as well as the more stable flow...he also had better wordplay...so basing off of that...EyeDentdy came with the better overall verse so he gets my vote...

VOTE - EYEDENTDY

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