PoEtIc JuStIcE
structure was pretty good...good, stable flow...u had some metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

DoggyDogg69
puttin "" around ur words does not make it wordplay man...but anywho...structure was pretty good...flow fell off a little...u had a few metas...wordplay was simple and wack...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a pretty good structure...neither had good personals...PoEtIc JuStIcE had the more stable flow...as well as more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...PoEtIc JuStIcE gets my vote for a better overall verse...

VOTE - POETIC JUSTICE

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx man...