...UnBroken Perfection...
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IP:
verbal
you had an ok verse but some of it was talkin about
you was goin to kill him so it was filler and selfglorification
but the punches you did have they were decent
structure was off and the flow was off because of it
you have potential elevate
fuse
nice drop you came harder in the punches category
and personals but i wasnt feelin your structure at all
your flow was off because of the stretched lines
work on that but you had some creativity and wordplay
keep elevating
vote/fuse for harder punches
honest vote
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