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Old 07-06-04, 11:35 AM   #10
Malefic
.....Death Awaits.....
 
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lyricalsolja
yo ima leave this dude shook wit a stupid look,
you a bitch in everybodys rhyme book,
this is kinda bit. 1/10
so dont deny it and try to be defyant,
cause your lyrics are wack and not very relyant,
bad multi's. 2/10
so this about this next line and what ima bout to say,
your worse than a fag you just a wannabe gay,
actually a wannabee's better than a fag. 1/10
so come out of your hiding place and face this music,
im givin you permission to bite go ahead and use it,
Bite your's lmao. 2/10
i should get arrested for this shit im too abusive,
you wack at this shit get used to loosin,
you cant get a vote you need to get stiched up cause im lyricly brousin.
Ok closer for you. 3/10
Not feelin this at all. Too basic. Be more creative. Use punches an personals. No hate. Just tryna help.
7/50

Brotha-Hood
When I flow its like I designed rap n made a new invention
All this man does is rap like he stuck in his own dimension
Ok. Kinda. but u talk bout urself. 3/10
305 posts n he aint won a battle? He just a try hard
get a life man u 19 u degenerated retard
think u meant degenerate. pretty funny. 4/10
solja I read ur life thru ur profile I can tell ur personality
ur game is weak u need ta get a grip on reality
Weak personal 3/10
only time u find this fool flowing is after a late night vindaloo
all his shit doesn’t make sence his mouth cant even get off tha loo (toilet)
Blah. 3/10
U kill ur self wit ur flow n trap ur self wid ur bars like u in jail
Now am a realease u frum the game man like u out on bail
Nah. played. 1/10
Lyriclesolja I picked u fo a easy win n I aint gon get surprised
Ur flows r like ur dick……..circumcised.
this was ok. but played. 2/10
am a end this shit now with out a second mention
i bet this kids realy about 13 n stuck in detention......
weak ass punch/closer 2/10
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You weren't Horrible. But you need alot of improvement. Just try an use a higher vocab in your verse. Also be more creative, I seen alot of played lines in your verse. You won this one i think tho. Good Job.
18/60

Vote/BrothaHood

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