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Old 07-06-04, 11:39 AM   #9
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this was umm not a good battle
killah your structure and flow was off i couldnt find your punches because it was that bad
structure should be like this
line 1 XXXXXXX
line 2 XXXXXXX
lines should be even to make a good flow

you get what im tryin to say elevate
brotha
it was kinda one sided no doubt you took this one
and least in your verse i could read it good and found the punches

vote/brotha
for overall better everything