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Old 07-06-04, 11:47 AM   #4
Malefic
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E-Dubz
its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
seem'd a lil self hype. no punch at Mix. 5/10
my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest
I always see these "lyrical weapons"....no personals 4/10
Your flo was on Key. I was feelin that, just the punches. The one. Wasn't even direct...It could have been used on me. No hate. Jus tryna help. Be more personal
9/20
Mixtape
Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
This was OK. nothing special 5/10
You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...
sik multi's. all in correct context.nice. good punch. 7/10
Not very personal either but what made your's a little different was your last bar. you had very nice flo with a good use of multi's. Again use personal punches. It'll help. Nice Job.
12/20

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Nice from both of you tho.
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