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Old 07-06-04, 02:19 PM   #7
Ca'lam
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Originally Posted by State CapiTol
e-dubz:

its like beatin my dick for ‘glory’ another ‘win’ im cummin to collect
battlin me is a subliminal message..... that your gunnin fo respect
good flow good structure good punch good wordplay 8.5/10
my fans are namin me a ‘bug’ killer.... the way i take out the ‘pest’
treatin this nigga like a ‘vampire’ i put a lyrical ‘stake’ thru yo chest
first line played..second line was also played but good 7.6/10

mixtape:

Ayo E-Dubz "im dope as hell" then not even 1 percent of BEST in your rhymes...
What ya hope to sell? must think im blind in the ear and deff in the eyes...
i wasnt feelin this line that much 1st line you glorified yourself its not good to do that with only 4 lines... 6.8/10
You a mild threat, play this never be,like chemistry and disect your dialect...
De-mented,ugly,fatal,devestating when this child rep,tried to test the wild vet...
good flow..good adjectives lol....umm this was better ..some confusing but i could understand it 8.5/10

vote: e-dubz


no hate i have mad respect for you both

mixtape you would of got this if you didnt glorify yourself in the first line and if the second line hit harder

and e-dubz your last line was played but you still won this because of

consistancy

i second this.. he pretty much said what i want to say..

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