Verbal Violence you still gotta work on ya structure man, it throws ya flow off, and makes ya verse harder to read. You have been elevating though, I noticed you were trying throwing harder punches this time, but some of em werent working. Like your opener, smith and wesson has nothing to do with venom, and the ice cream cone for a mic...You didnt close out well either, you gotta hit hard on ya open and close, make those your two hardest lines if possible.

BXP...nice job on the structure, and flow was pretty precise throughout ya verse. A few nice metas in there also, like down to earth(although ive heard that before). Your opener was pretty strong, i thought you coulda closed better as well though. You were pretty consistent with your entire verse though, maybe a lil harder on the punches next time...not that they werent good though. Nice Verse overall

v/BXP