Yeah this was a pretty easy call.
flow:BXP
structure:BXP
personals:BXP
punches:BXP
open:BXP
close:BXP
metas:tie

Ms. Versatyle, you need to work on your structure. A better structure makes your flow sound better, and its easier to read. You were throwing punches, you just need to elevate them a bit and make em hit harder. Try some personals also, those are usually the hardest hitting punches. A little better on the vocab, so that you dont rhyme with such simple words would help also.

v/BXP

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133225