deleon you had nice flow... iffy wordplay and pretty solid punches
you threw in multies and that made your verse flow much better
bestline:So I’m gonna finish this herb and put an end to his text..
History Repeats itself watch another Sire get sentenced to the death....
worstline:Murkin this herb wont land me any kind of respect….
Cuz hes known to talk out his ass like Eddie Murphy in Shrek...
overall 8/10 room for work...

sire
you had really good wordplay... but that last line did seem like
it was pretty danm gay ya feel?u need harder punches and
way better flow..ur strucutre sucked big balls
bestline:no surprise he comes dope, when it's me he's facin
DeLeon's on my dick
so when I get hard, he'll rise to the occasion
worstline:beatin me's impossible... let it go, it's over son
like you 68'd me
..................I leave you owe 'n one
just plain gay and that and ur strucutru ruined you verse along with that last line
my vote deleon

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