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Old 07-06-04, 05:50 PM   #12
B.X.P
...UnBroken Perfection...
 
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this was pretty good
boston your structure and flow could have been better but you had some creativity
but your punches were ok but you lacked in personals and personals wins battles your punches could have been directed to anybody keep elavatin
QB you had an ok flow ok structure good verse harder hitiing punches because they were personals and your metas were awesome keep it up

vote/Qb
for harder punches