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Old 07-06-04, 05:59 PM   #13
The Black Plague
... I Dont Hate...
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From: Detroit
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Weak battle, but truth takes it barely, just cuz bodo had some gay ass lines...

Bodo- Your opener was gay and didn't made sense, which took away from your verse. You had some weak, played punches that didn't hit. You didn't really have any personals, and your closer was gay. The only good thing you did was your struc, but everything else sucked. Wack verse.

Datruth- Your verse also was pretty bad. Your first four lines were pretty good, but then it fell off from there, rapidly. You had some punches that missed completely, and you also didn't really have any personals. Your wordplay and flow was better, and your struc was aight, so you get my vote. Elevate tho.
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