damn, need credits...

aight: BZ

punches: didnt hit once
personals: truthfully none at all
creativity: mediocre
word play: goin no where
structure: try bars, lines or some thing
metas: they appeared alot

femcee:

punches: decent
personals: had a few with the first line (links)
ceativity:you have a good sense of relation
word play: things went ok
structure: you had some at least, unlike BZ
metas: second bar had some, (g-unit lines)

comment: those other two voters have to be dick riders cause femcee obviuosly took this away, no doubt.

vote: femcee

return the favor, about to battle liyrical flow

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