LoL I dont even know what to say... It looked like there was more than one battle here.

BZ - You need to work on your strucrure...it makes it hard to follow ya shit and things. I read over it a few times though, and I could pick it up (I copy pasted it and broke it down myself actually)

BZ did have a lot of multi rhymes in there, and when i broke it down it really did have a nice flow to it. A few punchlines in there also, like the tornado debris.

BZ you aint really have any personals though...and actually a few metas.

Femcee you had a good structure, flow was decent.

Femcee where were the punches? You were comparing him to 50 cent and banks...2 proven emcees? why?

Femcee you didnt use any multis, and your opening meta kinda went in his favor.

I think you underestimated him...even though he didnt have much structure his verse really wasnt bad.

v/BZ No Mercy