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Old 07-06-04, 09:17 PM   #13
Magic5
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G-Ballz
structure was pretty good...some of ur lines were a lil stretched though...flow was decent...u had a few metas...some of ur wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...ok personals...

hotshh!
y do u type in all caps...that shit is mad annoying...structure was wack as hell...seperate ur damn lines man...flow was wack as hell due to the wackness of the structure...no metas...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
G-Ballz had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...G-Ballz tore hotshh! a new asshole...

VOTE - G-BALLZ

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx man...