Blimp
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...that newbish...structure was pretty good...flow was decent...u had some nice metas...wordplay was tight...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

J DOT
dont feed hoecake...that takes away from ur verse...and like i told blimp, dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...structure was pretty good...flow was ok...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty simple...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a pretty good structure...both had an alright flow...neither had good personals...blimp had more, and better metas...blimp had better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...blimp gets my vote for a better overall verse...

VOTE - BLIMP

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote in the link in my sig...thanx man...