look kid, I'ma beat your ugly head open
you're better off....
than online, so just log out instead of postin
- not really feelin this punch- its a creative rhyme scheme though - 6/10
I'm launchin the end.... of you're RB career
DeLeon's got the Blueprint
.................of my fuckin fist on his ear
lol- this was pretty funny, nice setup decent punch -- 7.5/10
kids got the brains of a chimp, catch my drift?
got the jump off poppin...
when he landed at the bottom of the cliff
I liked your setup- but I wasn't feelin the punch too much- 7/10
no surprise he comes dope, when it's me he's facin
DeLeon's on my dick
so when I get hard, he'll rise to the occasion
This shit is kinda funny, Not a brand new concept but effective punch- 7/10
call me the laugh doctor, shit almost comical
I have no patients....
& I need some, so I'ma put him in the hospital
I liked this- good flow, decent punch--- 7.5/10
beatin me's impossible... let it go, it's over son
like you 68'd me
..................I leave you owe 'n one

I thought that punch was pretty dope- "O and 1"- Good wordplay, The setup isn't that great, cuz its kinda fruity, you coulda said "like Buyin a Dime with Nine"- Instead of "You 68'd Me"- yamean?--- 7/10 tho cuz the punch was outta nowhere.


Mods…U really want me to square wit him…Aight…here I come
I’ll feed your tank top w/ pellets like fer fish in an aquarium
I know what you were sayin here, but It don't work for me- the punch was decent just not somethin I woulda used for an opener - 6-10
Call this an obstacle?...please who said this kid's a threat?
im sending him back to square one like rookie smokers on their 1st cigarette
Line stretched here a little bit- kinda weak punch- 6.5/10
This is how a Hard-Wood Class-sick suppose to go your rep is getting torn
hes an alias…but your verses need extension cords….. to get restored
The first line was pretty decent, and the whole bar flowed nicely, but no solid punches here- pretty weak... 6/10
Murkin this herb wont land me any kind of respect….
Cuz hes known to talk out his ass like Eddie Murphy in Shrek
this was kinda funny- decent punch i guess nothing spectacular- 7/10
What I write kills….play your role and follow Capitols drills
cuz Even If You Put Aleve In A Rope you couldn’t tie-pill (type ill)....
This was probly your best bar here, couple of decent punches, nice setup with the link. 8/10
So I’m gonna finish this herb and put an end to his text..
History Repeats itself watch another Sire get sentenced to the death....
This was a weak closer-- very basic, text and death... uh uh... 6/10

structure/rhyme scheme- Sire
Opener- Neither
Closer- Sire
Wordplay- Tie-
Punches- Deleon because I think you had the strongest punch in the battle

Vote - Sire... I just felt his verse more in this.... Return the votes.

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