Lyriclesolja
structure was ok...some of ur lines were just goin everywhere, short and stretched...even that crap out...flow fell off quite a bit...u had a few metas...wordplay was basic...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Datruth29
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its gay...but ur structure was pretty good...flow was decent...u had a few metas...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a few metas...neither had good personals...Datruth29 had the more stable structure...as well as the more consistent flow...on top of that...he had the better wordplay, as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Datruth29 gets my vote...

VOTE - DATRUTH29

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx man...