The Ups and Downs of Life
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Gota's the reason rb will forever get clowned
He's like iron Mike speaking, intelligent thoughts are never found
This was a pretty basic bar-- Mike Tyson/Intelligence jokes, you killed the multi by stickin "get" in the first line, and clowned and found aren't very difficult rhymes-- 5/10
I'm going easy on him usin a mallet instead of my sledge hammer
what else can i say to a kid who doesn't have grade school grammer
first line was a pretty decent setup... second line wasn't great but decent- it's "grammar" by the way.- 7/10
Whatever fuck him I'm the champ like Greece in the Euro Cup
And he's like Bizarre after 2 sit ups he just could never get up
First line is a decent setup again, through a similie in there- but again you killed your multi and rhyming Up with Cup isn't very difficult.- 7/10
sayin your damn ill well that's what it makes feel to read your verse
You rap like ice cubes in the sun, all raps hotness is dispersed
this was probly the best bar I've seen from you- decent punch- 7.5/10
He reps wackness while i rep the owners of this site
the kids 7 and 11 because he's whoring out wins all night
this bar was just upsetting... I know Gotta isn't known as "The Dopest" on the site, and I think up to this point in your verse you've been counting on that... I've seen you come alot harder than this- site and night is the rhyme, decent personal the setup is o.k I guess... 7/10
He's got more losses then wins yet he's claimin to be the best
Come ON Kid that's like eve claimin shes got the worlds largest chest
This is better... Nice personal diss on the setup- Good punchline, this had some humour to it... 8/10
This kids all on supremes dick crying about how he didn't steal lines...
What i can't believe is how this kid got 5 votes 7 times
I wish you rhymed with some multi's in this verse because a multi would have made this closer snap nice... As it is its got some humor but It reads kinda choppy- 7/10
jpolls an idiot, that can go without bein said...
he sets the beef thread, then gets at me via pm...
This was a funny personal here... bein said and pm might sound good when you say it, I didn't give Jpoll the benefit though so I won't give it to you- so I'll say forced multi- 7/10
kid please u think u gotta chance of beatin me...
put down the blunt i think ur seein too much of that canadian weed...
The second line kinda stretches, but its a decent punch- 7/10
he keeps his jokes limited, hes scared to push me...
his avatar lets everyone kno hes pussy...
easy multi, its an attempt at a personal, just not really feelin it-- 7/10
ur a student...it looks like its time for ur spellin lesson...
its "im so pussy" u tryna forget the s' (look at his title)....
lmao- this was a good personal... it rhymes well- creative.... 8.5/10
he talks a good game, but hes scared of original heads...
he cant deny it, he was scared to come back to this thread...
nice use of the link- decent diss- o.k setup-- 7.5/10
this fag aint pick this outta a hat, he cant leave the kid alone...
he never dropped nuttin real, he gotta verse full of silicone...
decent multi, The punch aint too hard though equating fake with silicone is a basic similarity- decent verse... 7/10
polls gotta be wylin, sayin i aint got no talent...
hes beggin to be friends, hes in a crew named after my favorite rappers album(jay z - blueprint)...
lol- this was funny- the line stretched again so it deducts, but nice punch-- 7/10
now let daclassics nuts breathe and admit i took this battle wit ease...
its a shame u gettin served in ur own fuckin league
kinda weak closer... it flows o.k and It's a personal diss but I think some wordplay or multi woulda made this better... 6.5/10
I think on most given Days Poll woulda left with the win, but I think you just under-estimated him in this battle, your rhyme scheme was severely basic, and you didn't come with too many intense punches-- I felt like gottasswhoopin had a problem with his structure, but your rhymes were just too choppy with out enough support... Vote GottaAsswhoopin4U
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