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Old 07-07-04, 12:25 AM   #34
Tweeza
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Posts: 66
From: WA
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Krusty D: I really like your flow. Your punchlines was pretty good, but it was much better than Insane's. Just work on your structure a lil' bit. Alright cool!

Did I see in one of yo posts you talk about money and fans~
Muthafucka I make more returning my bottles and cans~
I really liked that!
Overall: 8/10

Insane 16: You need to work on your punchlines, they didn't hit hard at all.

and im the white kid who aint tryin to be like eminem/
while u on the corner in a dress tryin to be a feminem/
This line was completely unnecessary. You could've have done better. Better luck next time

Overall: 5/10

My vote: Krusty D