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Chapters out a book, reading about a crook.
Meeting up with a boxer with a pretty good left hook.
This crook nigga came into a store with a krome 4-four.
Then a boxer named ray austin, came in the store and was told to get on the floor.
He didn't listen so the crook grabbed him by the neck.
Ray saw the tech and say to follow orders would be best.
SO the crook with the weapon to him was stressin.
That if he ain't get what he wanted shit would be strecthin.
He said if shit strecthed, people would be shot.
Niggas in the chest and shortie'Z in the breast.
Now while the crok negotiating ray the boxer thinkin of ways he can be escapin.
He see's holes gaping but he does not try and face it.
Face the fact that if shit goes wrong he could get blasted.
"Damn this bastard"ray austin says.
The crook jus loads up on money in his bag witht he banger to the boxer's head.
Now while he is about to make his escape he thinks of takin ray jus in case.
Now ray don't wanna die right now, he thinks this is his cosequence for pumpin that base.
The crook opens the back door while ray in his arm.
Here's all of a sudden some kind of alarm.
While hopin in the car with the gun to austin.
He hears sirens so he thinks ray he shoud kill and the body he should be tossin.
So while thinkin this he straps ray down.
Ray doesnt kno what to do now.
Ray decides to try and make friends but doesn't know how to begin.
He claims to be a poor man but this all pretend.
The crook says look shut up my man but anyway if you was how you get them diamends(diamonds).
Ok tell you the truth man I'm ray austin.
"I knew i seen you before" the crooks says then begins heavil coughin.
The crook says, "My niga I like ya style the way you dance around the ring that shit is wild".
Thanks nigga" ray say with one of his commercial smiles.
Now they keep the talk on for the whole hour the crook was on the run.
Then the crook gets home and puts down his gun.
Ray thinks shit could of gotten worst.
The crook thinks I've made a friend robbin niggas and an old lady's purse.
Now they sit and chill watchin t.v.
Then ray says you can be in my posse believe me.
The crooks thinks and sees he needs a better life.
So he tells ray word that seems right.
For about year now the crook been gettin money from ray.
He seems to think that was one of the best days.
Well in his life because now he has girls and friends to chill wit.
He does everything legal with out havin to kill shit.
One days he walks back to ray's dressin stage.
He looks to turn on the light then eels something hit his rib cage.
(click click-blow) that's all he could here.
While he was fadin out he heard this in his ear.
Nigga you robbed the don of the streets and the champ in the ring.
Next time i think you should know who you pull a gun out on if you gone carry the thing.

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